Web, Mobile, and Branding.

Based in Charlottesville, Virginia.
Recent Tweets @BusinessBullpen
Posts We Like
Who We Follow

“Copy (or text, or words) used in design is a very particular type of creative writing that requires the inspiration of an artist and the control of a craftsman or craftswoman.”
—Mark Shaw, Copywriting: Successful writing for design, advertising and marketing

We don’t really think of business writing as creative writing, in part because the aims of business writing—to sell a service or a product—seem so different than those of creative writing—to express one’s self, to move an audience, to make some kind of social commentary, and so on. But they do have similar challenges for writers, the most important of which is creating just the right tone.

What is tone?
Tone is huge in any kind of writing. Finding a tone is like finding something to wear to an event; your choice to wear jeans, a cocktail dress, or a suit depends on where you’re going. You wouldn’t wear a cocktail dress to a football game, and you wouldn’t wear jeans to a job interview. Hopefully.

The same goes for tone in writing. More than being about a command of language, writing copy for websites (or any kind of business marketing) is about having a command of tone.

Why does tone matter?
How you set the tone for a website will determine how well you engage customers and ultimately help a client sell its products or services. It’s the job of the copywriter to understand a company’s brand and goals well enough to find the appropriate tone to communicate their offerings. If you’re writing copy for a legal firm, you probably want to go with a balanced, professional tone that conveys strength, intelligence, and reliability. If you’re writing copy for a bakery, you probably want something more casual—something more welcoming and accessible.

How do you find it?
While intuition is a big part of finding the right tone, you can break the method down into some logical components. Here are some things I think about when I’m trying to find the right pitch:

  • Who is the company? How do they want or need to portray themselves?
  • Who is the audience for the website? Are they young? Old? Traditional? Creative?
  • What does the overall design of the site look like? Is it professional and polished or hip and casual?
  • What words would you associate with the company? When you look at those words, what kind of overall impression do you get of the service or products?
  • If you were buying something from this site, what tone of voice would hold your interest?

One more word on tone: Whatever tone you go with, make sure you’re consistent. You don’t want to button up your content on one page and let it all hang out in another. Just like you wouldn’t slip into denim cut-offs halfway through a wedding ceremony. That would just be … confusing.

Posted by Jessica Swope, web editor for Business Bullpen. You can follow Jessica on Tumblr.
  1. what-does-smh-mean reblogged this from businessbullpen
  2. consumer-energy-alliance reblogged this from businessbullpen
  3. famous-paintings reblogged this from businessbullpen
  4. keyword-growshop reblogged this from businessbullpen
  5. wow--guide reblogged this from businessbullpen
  6. iklan-gratis reblogged this from businessbullpen
  7. tarot-visa reblogged this from businessbullpen
  8. empresas-marketing-online reblogged this from businessbullpen
  9. cheapunlockcodes reblogged this from businessbullpen
  10. class-3-weapons-license reblogged this from businessbullpen
  11. justbet reblogged this from businessbullpen
  12. telemedicinex reblogged this from businessbullpen
  13. emergency-preparedness reblogged this from businessbullpen
  14. ireland-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  15. wing-tsun reblogged this from businessbullpen
  16. how-to-be-rich reblogged this from businessbullpen
  17. atv-games reblogged this from businessbullpen
  18. goutcauses reblogged this from businessbullpen
  19. pocket-squares reblogged this from businessbullpen
  20. ascot-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  21. web-design-z reblogged this from businessbullpen
  22. how-to-get-perfect-abs reblogged this from businessbullpen
  23. iphone--unlocking reblogged this from businessbullpen
  24. plumber-in-armadale-wa reblogged this from businessbullpen
  25. how-to-grow-taller-fast reblogged this from businessbullpen
  26. wealthy--affiliate reblogged this from businessbullpen
  27. shakeology-cleanse reblogged this from businessbullpen
  28. seo-murah reblogged this from businessbullpen
  29. blog--spot reblogged this from businessbullpen
  30. billig-internet reblogged this from businessbullpen
  31. storbyferie reblogged this from businessbullpen
  32. lg32le4500 reblogged this from businessbullpen
  33. jordan-cars reblogged this from businessbullpen
  34. playstationbeyond reblogged this from businessbullpen
  35. taupoaccomodation reblogged this from businessbullpen
  36. serviced-apartments-birmingham reblogged this from businessbullpen
  37. godaddy-coupons-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  38. puppies-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  39. eye-stye reblogged this from businessbullpen
  40. android-apps-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  41. hydroponics-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  42. saltele-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  43. supplements-x reblogged this from businessbullpen
  44. nook-books reblogged this from businessbullpen
  45. phoenix-landscapers reblogged this from businessbullpen
  46. fonts-for-tattoos reblogged this from businessbullpen
  47. ricosantos reblogged this from businessbullpen
  48. cvilleeditor reblogged this from businessbullpen